Reviews For Moving On
Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 09/03/12 17:16
Chapter: Time To Go

heyyy, i've really enjoyed this chapter but im upset that you haven't written for ages :'(
Please could you write another chapter i feel this story could really go far.
Maybe if you're feeling uninspired then you should re-watch/re-read the harry potter series to give you some ideas.
I think it would e good if draco turned out to be a teacher at the school and hermione and him get to know each other that way... but that's just an idea.
Good luck with the story and i hope you at least consider continuing the fic (it would be a shame to stop after the first chapter!)as it has been really good at setting the scene so far.
hope you continue the story and then complete the story
beaflower114 xx

Author's Response: Hi, thank you for your review, it's very much appreciated. I don't really post on this site anymore, mostly due to my inability to keep a beta for very long, so my chapters sometimes simply can't be posted on this site. This fic is actually completed, and has been for a while, it's posted on fanfiction.net under the same title, but with my pen-name as Half-BPrincess if you'd like to read more of it. And in it, Draco is a teacher. Thank you again for the review.

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 12/29/11 0:42
Chapter: Time To Go

Your unanswered questions in this chapter are open to innumerable answers. I'm excited to see where you'll take this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, I'm glad that you've enjoyed this fic so far. This fic is completely written, and will be updated as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Natajess
Date: 11/24/11 16:31
Chapter: Time To Go

Nice start, a little vague on some histroy, leaves the reader in the dark about what happened to Harry and Ron.

Looking forward to having Herminoe teach instering to see how it works.

Author's Response: The history here is intentionally vague, what happened to Ron and Harry is explained in Chapter 7, the rest of the history being drip fed throughout the other five chapters. Hermione's first lesson is included in Chapter 4, so keep your eyes peeled as the chapters continue to be posted. Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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