Reviews For Someone Like You
Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 10/24/13 10:52
Chapter: Bittersweet

This is a great idea: building a Neville/Luna relationship despite who marries who in the end. I really like Luna, how even though she's older, she still has the same way of viewing the world.

One little typo I noticed:
You said
"it’s supposed to be natural habitat of the Bainodendrons, you know?"

Isn't it "to be 'the' natural habitat" ?

Anyway, great job! I really like the bittersweet ending.

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/23/11 3:26
Chapter: Bittersweet

I was really sad that J.K.R. didn't put them together! But you gave us a great glimpse into what that would've been like. And of course, that song is already timeless. It was a good choice to use it :)

Reviewer: Salazar92
Date: 12/01/11 22:32
Chapter: Bittersweet

That was so sweet! I'm a big fan of this ship too and I really think you did it justice :) I read your other fic Albus Potter and the Midnight Thief, so I thought I'd check out some of your other stuff and this caught my eye. I really felt for Luna at the end and I think you matured Neville well without compromising the Neville of the books - great job!

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