Reviews For The Real Magic
Reviewer: Dad
Date: 05/24/12 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends and Farewells

I thought that was just a lovely story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 03/22/12 3:18
Chapter: Chapter 3: Books and Betrayal

I love this! It's so well written, you can really feel Hermione's emotions. Its one my favourite fics!!! Nidhi

Author's Response: Thank you! That was one of the things I most wanted to get across. As Hermione is so widely written about, I knew I'd have to work really hard to make her character convincing. I'm glad you felt for her :)

Reviewer: juniper
Date: 03/08/12 5:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Loving and Loathing

Great job!

Reviewer: juniper
Date: 03/08/12 5:11
Chapter: Chapter 3: Books and Betrayal

Great job! I'm really enjoying this.

Reviewer: baseballblondie
Date: 03/07/12 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 3: Books and Betrayal

Poor Hermione! I am enjoying this story and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 03/07/12 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Solitude and Solidarity

This is such a wonderful story! I can't wait to read more! (Looks at author hopefully.)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! And the other chapters are coming (but I'm afraid there are only two more!!)

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 03/07/12 4:35
Chapter: Chapter 3: Books and Betrayal

Sad chapter. This fic is very well written, it's as if you can feel Hermione's emotions. In a few seconds, it'll be officially one of my favourite fics. :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I felt this chapter was really important, as it obviously sets up Hermione's loyalty that we see in the later books. But I wanted people to genuinely sympathise for her not just because she's Hermione, but because she felt very realy emotions. It took me a while, but I'm so glad you got them! It's what I aim most to achieve, so I'm really happy :)

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 01/20/12 3:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Solitude and Solidarity

Very nice beginning! Its really good so far! :)

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/29/11 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Solitude and Solidarity

I loved seeing Hermione as she was before Hogwarts, and it's nice that she met a boy who she can relate to. I bet she sensed that she wasn't normal for a long time before she found out about being a witch! And this makes me wonder what Jamie will think of her when things change. Great story so far.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have plans for the revelation of her witchiness (is that a word?) which shall be revealed at a later date, but yes, I did like creating a person so separate from the magical world. I feel like we hardly know anything about Hermione - certainly least of the trio in terms of background - and I always wondered why she never told Harry and Ron about it. That's what inspired me to write this fic, I suppose :)

Reviewer: LittleJM
Date: 12/28/11 2:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Solitude and Solidarity

I was really, really impressed with this. Hermione is characterized very well, and I am excited to see what is coming with the next chapters!
Joy

Author's Response: Thanl you!

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 12/26/11 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Solitude and Solidarity

Very good beginning! I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Nearly finished the second chapter, so hopefully shouldn't be too long.

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