Reviews For Hymn To The Fallen
Reviewer: LuneyLaney
Date: 01/13/12 1:24
Chapter: Hymn to the Fallen

Lovely. There was a ton of raw emotion that came through. I always wondered what must have been in the mind of Harry's friends as Hagrid carried Harry back to the castle and this seems to fit it perfectly. Good work.

Author's Response: My poetry is all very . . . raw. I, too, always wondered about what Harry's actions did to his friends. I know that if my best friend died. . . I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks a mil! (Reviews make my day)
Ellie

Reviewer: GirlWhoCriedWhenSiriusDied
Date: 01/13/12 0:26
Chapter: Hymn to the Fallen

I didn't like it... I loved it. :) At first I sighed thinking it was poetry, I'm always wanting more in poetry you see, but I was satisfied. I always wanted to see everyone's reaction to 'dead Harry' before they see he is still alive. I think you captured it perfectly. I especially liked Neville's POV.

Author's Response: Wow . . . thank you so much for the review. Poetry does leave a lot to thought, but I'm glad you were happy with it. I have always wondered about what Harry's death did to his friends emotionally, because I know that if it was my best friend laying there that I would be crushed. Also, isn't Neville great? I think he's underrated. :)

Thank you so much for the review
Ellie

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