Reviews For Your Anatomy
Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/11/13 15:02
Chapter: Hermione's Side

Adorable! Well done.

Reviewer: InvestedWithNargles
Date: 01/24/12 22:37
Chapter: Ron's Side

Awww! I loved this and I really hope you add on to it! I would love to see something like this, but from Hermione's point of view. :)

Reviewer: DobbyDeath
Date: 01/24/12 22:09
Chapter: Ron's Side

Ahh! I love Romione! Your story i give an eight out of ten! (thats really good, cuz im usually very harsh). The one thing I say to work on is your despription (While VERY good, just a little tweaks here or there). But overall it was a great story

Reviewer: LoveYouAlways
Date: 01/23/12 3:18
Chapter: Ron's Side

That was lovely! It's hard to think that Ron could be thinking all of that but I loved it! Can't wait until an update!

Reviewer: goldensnidget92
Date: 01/22/12 17:44
Chapter: Ron's Side

Although I do think there's room for improvement on the grammar - some sentences didn't flow properly when I read them - I did really like the concept of this fic. I especially liked the way you mentioned Ron and Hermione being prepared for the Second Task. It's something that's never been addressed in the series, and I thought that was a really interesting detail to bring up. I also thought Ron's characterisation was good: he was still quite awkard around her, which I thought was realistic. Well done!

Reviewer: silverlining95
Date: 01/21/12 22:30
Chapter: Ron's Side

This is really well written, the emotion and tenderness really shine through, but not in a cheesy way,but instead honest and thoroughly believable, I hope a second chapter will be up soon!

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