Reviews For Teenage Kicks
Reviewer: enola123
Date: 04/22/12 18:07
Chapter: Albus

Morgan Lark is now officially my favorite OC. She seems to know how to put Albus in his place. Rose's chapter was my favorite ( it sounded almost lyrical). However, I really felt sympathetic toward Rose (and hate Effie's harshness).Mostly, I'm eagerly awaiting the fallout when Albus and Rose's friends find out about what they are really doing. I also think it would really funny to see their reactions when the cousins find out about each other.

Reviewer: September December
Date: 04/14/12 4:25
Chapter: Rose

Love it!! Read all three chapters today and I'm totally hooked! I usually hate it when chapters are told by different POVs but in your chapters events that occur to one character come back up with another which is great. I was a bit confused though on who Albus was just with while he was supposed to be on prefect duty. Effie or Morgana? Anyways great work! Can't wait to read more:)

Reviewer: silverlining95
Date: 04/12/12 12:30
Chapter: Rose

Wow. Rose's chapter is my favourite yet, and I have to say I honestly didn't see that one coming!

I thought your characterisation of Rose was dead on, she's got the trademark Weasley fiery nature, but with her mother's brains and insecurities.

Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: Salazar92
Date: 01/22/12 18:00
Chapter: Albus

Wow Alice, I really like this! I follow your fic Albus Potter and the Midnight Thief, and I stumbled upon this - it's really good! It's nice seeing them when they're all grown up. We haven't seen too much of Morgana in your other Next Generation fic, but I hope we see more cause I really like her in this!! Update soon please :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Hot Off the Press by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
"I'm waking up to ash and dustI wipe my brow and I sweat my rustI'm breathing...
Delayed Arrival by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
"The slightest words you've saidHave all gone to my head.I hear angels sing...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES