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Reviews For The Mother

Name: srhittson (Signed) · Date: 09/20/13 11:41 · For: The Mother
Creepy mother but good story


Name: fiesty (Signed) · Date: 03/16/12 3:18 · For: The Mother
The narrator kept referring to Harry as "it" in your story, which is not typical of a woman like that. She is more likely to refer to the baby as "him" instead. Other from that. it is an interesting idea.


Name: Kateysue (Signed) · Date: 02/07/12 5:46 · For: The Mother
I really like this story as-is. I would definitly follow a longer AU, but the way it's written is almost poetry.


Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 4:56 · For: The Mother
I'm of the other opinion. I love the way you left things hanging, questions unanswered, much like the Twilight Zone did to good effect. This piece sounded very much like a Rod Serling script to me.


Name: armagod679 (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 0:06 · For: The Mother
This is an excellently written "what if?" story. I think it would be interesting if you did a chaptered piece following "Andrew" in this new situation.


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