Very well written. At first I had some difficulty understanding which point of view was which but after I figured that out it was well worth a read. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I did try to leave some small clues/sense of continuity between each POVs, but I definitely think it'd be confusing on the first read.
Given up fanfiction, eh?
Quite brilliant. Sorry, actually incoherent here and incapable of leaving anything approaching a decent review. I will need to re-read and re-read and re-read, so am saving to favourites.
Why is your smut so wonderful? Why? Why? Why, do I have to go to work?
Than Michael Corner is a prat. I knew he was no good. ~Carole~
Author's Response: Any person who refuses to go down on a girl is a prat IMHO. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3