Reviews For Not Even Him
Reviewer: J-Holly
Date: 04/06/13 0:41
Chapter: Not Even Him

He seemed so sincere, and it was all a trick! I can't believe it!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/24/12 23:21
Chapter: Not Even Him

Crafty, crafty Riddle. Man, I would have fallen for his lies, just as Helena did! How does he do it?
You captured Tom perfectly! How I sometimes wish I was a character in this story that knew Tom...

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 02/28/12 0:34
Chapter: Not Even Him

I must say. I don't tend to read a lot of historical stories, but this one intrigued me, and I honestly liked it a lot. I see someone else pointed out the few errors I also found, so I won't repeat them. Great job though! :D I'll have to look and see if you have anything else I can read now.

~Alyssa

Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 02/27/12 21:27
Chapter: Not Even Him

Brilliant story line, well written.
Just a few mistakes I spotted:
On the first line, I think that 'change' should be 'changed'.
Later on, you say vaunting ambition, but shouldn't that be vaulting ambition? A short quote from Shakespeare's Macbeth, I believe.
Apart from those errors which were probably just typos, a really good piece.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Of Myth and Magic by Wonk 6th-7th Years
She knew it wasn't good for her, standing here like this, waiting for something...
Against the Dying of the Light by starscribe 3rd-5th Years
A first war story. As the Order is plunged into a war for which they are unprepared...
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
FEATURED
Whatever Happened to Saturday Night by Simply Being 3rd-5th Years
A short tale of the Marauder's friendship and its subsequent demise. Songfic...
Love is Like a Wrong Turn on a Cold Night by lucca4 6th-7th Years
Michael Corner muses on his short-lived relationship with Daphne Greengrass...
Maps by the opaleye Professors
Tell me, is the rose naked Or is that her only dress? -Pablo Neruda Four...
Pineapple in the Library by 1000timesingoldenink 1st-2nd Years
It's late on a Sunday evening, and Neville has a couple of questions...Why is...
CATEGORIES