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Reviews For Not Even Him

Name: J-Holly (Signed) · Date: 04/06/13 0:41 · For: Not Even Him
He seemed so sincere, and it was all a trick! I can't believe it!


Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 05/24/12 23:21 · For: Not Even Him
Crafty, crafty Riddle. Man, I would have fallen for his lies, just as Helena did! How does he do it?
You captured Tom perfectly! How I sometimes wish I was a character in this story that knew Tom...


Name: harry4lif (Signed) · Date: 02/28/12 0:34 · For: Not Even Him
I must say. I don't tend to read a lot of historical stories, but this one intrigued me, and I honestly liked it a lot. I see someone else pointed out the few errors I also found, so I won't repeat them. Great job though! :D I'll have to look and see if you have anything else I can read now.

~Alyssa


Name: BrokenPromise (Signed) · Date: 02/27/12 21:27 · For: Not Even Him
Brilliant story line, well written.
Just a few mistakes I spotted:
On the first line, I think that 'change' should be 'changed'.
Later on, you say vaunting ambition, but shouldn't that be vaulting ambition? A short quote from Shakespeare's Macbeth, I believe.
Apart from those errors which were probably just typos, a really good piece.


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