Reviews For Not Even Him
Reviewer: J-Holly
Date: 04/06/13 0:41
Chapter: Not Even Him

He seemed so sincere, and it was all a trick! I can't believe it!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/24/12 23:21
Chapter: Not Even Him

Crafty, crafty Riddle. Man, I would have fallen for his lies, just as Helena did! How does he do it?
You captured Tom perfectly! How I sometimes wish I was a character in this story that knew Tom...

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 02/28/12 0:34
Chapter: Not Even Him

I must say. I don't tend to read a lot of historical stories, but this one intrigued me, and I honestly liked it a lot. I see someone else pointed out the few errors I also found, so I won't repeat them. Great job though! :D I'll have to look and see if you have anything else I can read now.

~Alyssa

Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 02/27/12 21:27
Chapter: Not Even Him

Brilliant story line, well written.
Just a few mistakes I spotted:
On the first line, I think that 'change' should be 'changed'.
Later on, you say vaunting ambition, but shouldn't that be vaulting ambition? A short quote from Shakespeare's Macbeth, I believe.
Apart from those errors which were probably just typos, a really good piece.

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