Reviewer: J-Holly
Date: 03/30/13 1:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Recollections

I liked it! Please go on with the next chapter, I can't wait!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/30/12 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Friendship Forged?

I am enjoying this, but I wish the chapters were a bit longer.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm working on it - I find that usually after about a thousand words I run out of meaningful things to say in the chapter.

Reviewer: stephaniemalfoy93
Date: 07/22/12 3:05
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Thoughts and Slow Conversations

I really like this! And what a Draco-Pansy scenario you had on there with Scorpius and Adrianna. Please post charter 3 real soon! I hope Rose inherited nothing of that daft side of Ron, or it would screw everything up ...

Author's Response: Thanks! For me, Pansy is one of those girls that just fawns over any male and so Adrianna is very easy and fun to write. ;) I will try to post as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/21/12 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Thoughts and Slow Conversations

I really enjoyed this chapter also. It's nice to think that Draco and his wife have accepted Muggles and that Astoria can hold her own with Lucius. I hope you do update soon and I don't lose track of you. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! Update coming soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/21/12 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Recollections

I enjoyed this first chapter. I'm almost thinking that the Rose/Scorpius relationship is one of my favorites. I can usually be drawn in to one of their stories. I noticed you had a couple of squares in this chapter instead of the punctuation. Does that happen to you a lot? Sometimes I hate to submit a chapter because it's got all of these little squares that I have to go back and edit out. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I have to say that I agree with you! Rose/Scorpius is one of my favourite pairings and I so wish that Rowling would write another book with the focus on the second generation. Actually, the square punctuation thing happens to me quite often- it is that most annoying thing! And thank you!

Reviewer: September December
Date: 05/01/12 2:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Recollections

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: I promise it will be up as soon as I find a spare minute to collect my thoughts and finish it!

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 03/03/12 17:00
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Recollections

hey i really like this! I like the way you have made Rose and Scorpius different from their parents, and Rose is such a likable character. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'll try to update it as much as possible!

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