Reviews For Drunk on Him
Reviewer: Indigo Cygnus
Date: 05/27/12 11:16
Chapter: Addiction

This story left me with a creepy feeling inside. It's not very often that one runs into a first person pov told from Peter's perspective. Kudos to you. You did a lovely job with this one. It started out sweet and ended up, well, as I said it before creepy and sad at the same time. Even though the story was short, his character felt very real and fresh. Not many people take him seriously, he's just the bastard who betrayed James and Lily and should be ridiculed because of it. But you took the time to think about it and give a plausible excuse to why he acted the way he did and in result you wrote a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: victoria lupin
Date: 04/24/12 5:46
Chapter: Addiction

wow. really awesome pov

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 03/06/12 6:08
Chapter: Addiction

Huh, not bad. It was better than I thought it would be. I read it solely on the count that I was curious. You did a good job.

Author's Response: Thank you?

Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/05/12 19:07
Chapter: Addiction

God that was haunting! At first I didn't realise it was Wormtail, but I guess I should've known when there were 3 of them talking about James. The fine line between obsession and love is well written, as is the rest of it really. The characterisation is really good too.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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