Reviewer: SalamanderSlytherin
Date: 08/10/14 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 1


Reviewer: bountybitch
Date: 08/01/13 13:34
Chapter: Chapter 1








Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 03/04/13 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwww cuuute

Reviewer: dreamsnape
Date: 02/24/13 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Whoa! When the summary said things aren't what they seem, I thought it would be Polyjuice Potion or something. The Dark Lord felt what? I'll have to think about that a bit.

Author's Response: Ha! This was just a joke to amuse myself and friends. :)

Reviewer: jlo147
Date: 10/19/12 9:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Is this a joke? The first Severus/Lily story I read in a long time and this is what I choose? I'm going back to Severus/Hermione. Thanks.. for nothing!

Author's Response: Yes. This was a cruel joke I played on unsuspecting Severus/Lily shippers. Or, let's say, Severus/Human Being shipper. I'm thrilled it worked and caused you so much pain ;)

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 09/26/12 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Where's my sequel?

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 09/22/12 7:16
Chapter: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Skittlesontrees
Date: 06/12/12 1:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Poor Snape! Way to end it.

Reviewer: PhoenixTears17
Date: 06/04/12 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting twist......

Reviewer: PhoenixTears17
Date: 06/04/12 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting twist......

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/27/12 4:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

I knew it was a dream! I've nothing else really to say... Poor Snape...

Author's Response: LOL.

Reviewer: Padfoot11333
Date: 03/30/12 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1


Natalie! What the hell [heck if mnff bleeps it out] was this? It was all smutty Snily, and then...


You have left me speechless with confusion. This is sooooo....PETER? SNAPE? PETER USING LILY TO GET TO SNAPE?

Since this should have some tiny semblance to a review, I thought it was really interestingthat it started off all melancholy and ended up THAT.

Agh, to hell with leaving a proper review. What went through your mind when you were writing this?

...and now I kind of want to see a sequel of Snape's revenge.

IBut first I think I need to go bleach my brain.

Lily xxx

Author's Response: Blame Gina. That's all I am saying.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 03/10/12 3:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah, Natalie. Natalie. Natalie. Natalie.

What can I say? All my snarky piss-taking (did I say that right?) finally came back to bite me in the arse. Not only is there a Severus/Lily fic on the archive dedicated to me, a diehard James/Lily fan, but it's not even Severus/Lily, it's something much, much darker.

You evil, evil woman, you.

I'm not even sure how to review this. It's a bit scary, really. I feel like maybe, just maybe I should feel sorry for Snape, but I don't. And the other party involved is creepy, so I feel nothing for them, that's for sure.

It's a clever premise, but definitely a bit twisted. What in the world were we talking about that prompted it? And whhhhhhy? I remember laughing uncontrollably, though, and waking up to see this made me laugh again.

Unless you wanted me to cry? I could, if I picture it happening. *shudder*

Anyway. The end with the Obliviate was brilliant. Don't you dare make it chaptered. If you must, write Carole a sequel. And make it Snirius. I'm sure we could come up with something suitably ridiculous if we troll LJ for ideas.

All right, before I start reakkt gushing, let me finish by saying THANK YOU!!! You are lovely, even if you are slightly insane and a bit cruel.;) If I had your crazy imagination, I would dedicate something equally as brilliant back at you. Unfortunately my worst pairing is Snapeheart, so you may have to wait for it.

~Gina :) :) :)

Author's Response: You should never encourage me ha ha. I think we were discussing how to troll the Clickysmut challenge and I said Snape and you just said Peter LOL. Noooo I don't want you to cry :'( <3333 I did it to make you laugh, of course! But I am cruel. Mmm. Thanks for reading again LOL.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 03/09/12 10:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Please make this chaptered.


Pretty please with cheese on.


Author's Response: Don't tempt me :3

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