Reviewer: welshdevondragon
Date: 04/17/12 18:28
Chapter: Soul Searching

This story was beautiful. I love the way you talk about the difference between fairy tale magic, and the magic she encounters at Hogwarts, and weave that in with her finding her Prince Charming, even though he isn't entirely perfect.

You characterise such a minor character so well here, in such a short amount of space, and the awful comparison of the Dementor's kiss and Prince Charming's true love's kiss, is a very powerful one, that makes me feel for Mary, a character I've never given much thought to before. It was beautiful--Alex

Author's Response: Thank you!

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