This is really cute!
This was amazing!! Neville is my favorite character, and I thought this brought out his character really well, and I liked your unique way of sharing his story. I would have liked to see some letters back from his grandmother, though, I think that they would be interesting. Once again, good job!
This was well done, and very enjoyable.
Awesome, I really liked "seeing" everything from Neville's perspective!
Aww...these are really sweet. I loved some of the little details, especially Gran killing Neville's plants and Uncle Algie being an eccentric and the snippet about him being dropped off the pier. You could really tell when Neville was excited, but I think the best bit was when he mentioned his parents. However, I don't think that the bit about accepting his mum's gifts shuld've been a P.S., as it seems a bit more important than that to him in OotP. But it was nice that he wanted his parents to be proud of him. Apart from that, this was really cute and I think that I will probably see Neville in a slightly different light from now on.
I absolutely love this! Hilarious! :D I was laughing too hard about Uncle Algie and his magical endeavours... ;P Could you write one about what Neville's Gran writes back to Neville about? The grammar thing was really great- Neville's Gran seems to be the type to be quite picky about grammar! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! That was my intention :) I'm glad you like the Uncle Algie bits - I have to admit, I did laugh when I wrote them! Interesting idea about writing them from his Gran's point of view... I will definitely think about it
Hee hee I always thought Neville was cute in the books... Is this like just for first year, because I think you should definitely continue this all the way through. It was very well done, and I liked how all of the letters said something important, not just a bunch of junk that nobody cares about. It was like reading a summary of Philosipher's Stone from Neville's POV. Ha, great job!