Very cute. Made me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had fun writing it. ~Carole~
LoL. Another lovely humor piece. I'm glad you're still at it! You deserve that QSQ award! Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The QSQ came as a huge surprise but a joyous one, (still grinning about it, actually) ~Carole~
Do you like recieving reveiws? Cool story. My sister thinks I'm a bit wierd. You're cool. :)
Author's Response: I love recieving reveiws. (My computer has gone crazy with its red squiggly lines - lol) I have a neice who thinks I'm wierd, too. Thank you for the review :) ~Carole~
This is brilliant! It is so cute and bubbly, and the set out makes it all the more fun. This is one of the first times I've ever warmed to Percy!
Love it love it love it! I'm glad Percy found a snappy but playful girl :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one and am pleased (if somewhat bemused) at the great reception it's received (i before e, :D). Audrey in my other stories isn't nearly as playful, sadly.
Thanks again ~Carole~
It is nice to see how the relationship between the two was able to quickly lead to a date. :) Hehe! I laughed. I had to. I caught the spelling mistake right away, but I realized just how foolish it sometimes is to try to have that be perfect. English always breaks the rules, which really annoys me. I find that I spell "field" and "weird" wrong sometimes, too, because English seems to throw the rule book out the window.
But that is not why I decided to leave a reveiw. (Laughs out loud). I had to leave one because this made me smile. Great job, Carole. :) I look forward to your next story. ~Nagini
Author's Response: I think Percy, having realised who A Cadwallader was, made a move quickly. He is a Gryffindor, after all.
Thanks for the review. This was a light bit of fluff, written on the hoof as a last minute entry in a comp which I then expanded. I'm rather astonished at th reception it's received but also very pleased.
really cool! Hope it was longer though especially the 'date' at the Copper Cauldron! Also loved the part about Ron and Hermione's relationship indirectly mentioned.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for leaving a review, and I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. Ha - yes, I couldn't resist a little mention of Ron and Hermione. ~Carole~
Oh boy, this was good. I love the way you presented the story in letters, and how they relied upon PS and PPS and PPPS's to say what they really wanted to. :P
You can see how Percy slowly lets down his guard, and for some unidentifiable reasion, Audrey seems to secretly like their exchanges. :P I love how Percy signed his last letter with "Love" instead of "Regards" or "Yours...".
Would she be in any way related to the Cadwallader of Hufflepuff that we hear about in HBP?
And one little nitpick- it is not "Reviewwwwwwwws", but "Reviews". Your spelling is atrocious! :P
Are you considering doing a follow up to this? Keep up the good work! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thank you, very much for the lovely and giggle-worthy review. It has certainly made me smile.
I used the name Cadwallader because I always thought it sounded fairly ludicrous, and she must be related to that Hufflepuff Quidditch player ... just not sure if she's a sister or a cousin yet. :D. I do have in mind that she's either the same year as Percy or a year below.
A follow up ... hmmm. Not very sure about that. Thing is, the Audrey who appears in another of my stories (Swans) is rather ... uhm, well, she's horrid to her daughter Molly, and I'm finding it hard to reconcile this lighter version with the other one I've written. I might write 'Unrobed by a Passionate Flame' however - LOL.
,br> Thank you again for the reveiw ... er ... review. ~Carole~
This is a lovely one-shot! Nice idea of how Audrey and Percy got together.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :) ~Carole~
Author's Response: thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. ~Carole~
Hahahahaha. The spelling idea was creative and totally fits Percy!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) ~Carole~
I have read (and reviewed!) this before, however after noting you'd won a QSQ for it I thought I'd re-read it as I remembered enjoying it.
I never noticed this line before, but something about it really got me. I can't really explain it! 'PPS: I am reliably informed by my youngest brother that ‘friendship’ is a very good basis for ... more.' Maybe it's the unexpected Romione reference, but I love it! It's also nice to see a snippet of their relationship from Percy's point of view. I'm probably not making much sense, and for that I apologise. I guess what I'm trying to say is that I love that line, and this story.
Author's Response: Ha ha ha - I'm so glad you liked that line as no one else seems to have picked up on it and I rather liked the idea that Percy and Ron were back on good talking terms. Whether Percy actually asked for Ron's advice or Percy overheard him is open to interpretation, but it made me giggle.
Thank you so much for the extra review - much appreciated. ~Carole~
Quite funny. I really enjoyed the story.. not quite a side of Percy you expect.
Author's Response: I like to think he might have loosened up a little after the war, but not when it comes to spelling and grammar! Thanks for the review ~Carole~
This is actually hilarious. I loved it. It's just like Percy to form a relationship over spelling mistakes. Maybe a sequel is in order?... :) Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. Not sure about a sequel, although writing 'Unrobed by a Passionate Flame' might be fun. ~Carole~
One of the few fan fics I've read recently that I have truely enjoyed reading. It was great!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm sure you'll find some other fics you enjoy on this site ~Carole~
I was grinning ear to ear this entire thing. So good. Gah!
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad it made you smile :) ~Carole~
Percy reading Marvel Miggs The Mad Muggle?! I don't believe it! Great Fic! It was amusing to read.~Nidhi
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had fun writing it, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. ~Carole~
This was great! It's the first epistolary humour fic I've read in... er, eternity.
Also, I don't mean to sound heretic here, but was that partly inspired by Stroud? The "boiling your head" part and one or two of Percy's urbane replies?
Yours in readership,
Author's Response: Um, I don't know what you mean by Stroud unless you mean the place in the UK, so no, it wasn't inspired by him/her or it. :). 'Boiling your head' is a phrase I think I picked up from Enid Blyton a few years ago, or something like that. Thank you very much for the review and I'm glad you liked the story. ~Carole~
This was very cute and definitely made me smile. I 'beleive' that this is my favourite Percy/Audrey I have read in a while! Although I like a good laugh, I don't generally go for humour fics, but I'm certainly glad I read this one. Great work!
Author's Response: OOOH, thank you. I have to confess that this was a dashed off drabble for SBBC that I expanded for the boards for minna. It had very little thought but a lot of love attached. I didn't sweat blood or tears, but did giggle. Perhaps that's the answer. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ~Carole~
This is so adorable and hilarious!
Author's Response: hahahahahah - thank you. It was fun to write. ~Carole~
Author's Response: hahahahahah - thank you. It was fun to write. ~Carole~
Awwww!!!! I love this so much!! I hope you make a sequel or something!!! :D ~Sarah
Author's Response: OHHHH, thank youuuu. Hmm, I might write a sequel. I can see them communicating with letters quite eloquently and it could be fun. Thanks again! ~Carole~