Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/30/13 16:43
Chapter: Burning in the Skies

This is great. I like angsty poetry about Draco, too, especially angsty poetry about Draco and his need for some sort of redemption. This fits the bill nicely.

The repetition of the sentiments regarding Draco and his burnt bridges added an incredible brooding quality to the poem as if he were really going through his past and the decisions he made.

Misting my hands and my heart with a/ Sweet crimson rain that never washed away;/ No matter how many times I tried to cleanse them.

I love this image. It's very reminiscent of Lady Macbeth trying to wash her hands clean.

Well done. ~Carole~

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/18/12 4:45
Chapter: Burning in the Skies

The review fairy strikes again!
You enraptured me from the first line- swimming in smoke! I shivered and oohed and ahhed! I felt like a young inquisitive child again! Nicely done. I'm very jealous of the magnificent imagery you have here!

Author's Response: Wow; thank you so much! I'm glad that everyone seems to be enjoying this one; I'm rather proud of it. Thanks so much for your kind words :)

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/15/12 4:18
Chapter: Burning in the Skies

Wow, 72 reads now and this is your first review for your poem. Well, I just wanted to let you know that I loved reading about what you had to say in your poem. It was really beautiful in every aspect. Though I don't know how to decipher the meanings in poetry very well, I like the darkness in this one. The end was really great it just makes me want to say wow!!!(:

P.S. I wanted to recommend a few poems since you seem to enjoy them so much... If you are looking for something good, Check out the poems by Nagini Riddle! Her poems are amazing just like yours! For a good read, check out her poem called "Her Hand." And then, if you don't mind, you should think about nominating that particular poem to the best poetry portion of the awar QSQ thing And spread the word around!!!(: Thank you so much!(:

Great poem!
~Cris!(;

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, and I give you mad props and thanks for being my first reviewer. And I have read 'Her Hand', and a few other ones by her; they are good. :)

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