Good to read another chapter.
I hope you update again soon!
You have slightly confused me with this chapter. Am I right in thinking this is before chapter three? Without reading the whole thing again, I am not sure of the time line.
It leaps from one action and set of characters to another and can be a bit difficult to follow. What I cannot do is miss any of it. A huge work.
Very complex. Unmissable.
Brilliant!! Amazingly brilliant!!
It was very exciting to read, but we now have one more twist in the plot.
I am left gasping for breath.
Brilliant as always!!
Some interesting history here, but meanwhile, back with Draco?
That was bloody brilliant!!!!
That was absolutely beautiful! I had tears as I read his heartfelt words to Tonks! Well done!!
WOW!!!! Very cool and amazing and I was thrilled that he gets to get the professor!! Brilliant imagery!!
A philosophical chapter with an ending that promises plenty more action. Still a lot of threads to pull together, but this is great writing.
Very nice twist...I had not expected Hermione at all.
This story is complicated and a bit thick to read and follow. Your use of detail is quite good, but also overwhelming at times. Be careful not to lose your reader along the way...
Go get 'em, Hermione.