Reviewer: zoreo09
Date: 02/02/13 22:44
Chapter: The Burrow

I hope you update again soon!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/12/12 8:14
Chapter: Voices in the Dark

You have slightly confused me with this chapter. Am I right in thinking this is before chapter three? Without reading the whole thing again, I am not sure of the time line.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/11/12 13:38
Chapter: Voices in the Dark

Pansy?! Woah.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/18/12 10:34
Chapter: The Ambush

It leaps from one action and set of characters to another and can be a bit difficult to follow. What I cannot do is miss any of it. A huge work.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/27/12 7:40
Chapter: An Ocean of Wisdom

Very complex. Unmissable.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/26/12 20:32
Chapter: An Ocean of Wisdom

Brilliant!! Amazingly brilliant!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/14/12 10:28
Chapter: The War

It was very exciting to read, but we now have one more twist in the plot.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/13/12 23:25
Chapter: The War

Fantastic!!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/07/12 18:25
Chapter: Ave Maria

I am left gasping for breath.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/07/12 1:22
Chapter: Tartarus

Brilliant as always!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/29/12 3:45
Chapter: Ave Maria

Fantastically brilliant!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/21/12 14:01
Chapter: Muggles

Some interesting history here, but meanwhile, back with Draco?

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/21/12 12:22
Chapter: Muggles

That was bloody brilliant!!!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/12/12 12:15
Chapter: Beyond the Veil

That was absolutely beautiful! I had tears as I read his heartfelt words to Tonks! Well done!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/11/12 9:25
Chapter: Beyond the Veil

Graphic writing.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/02/12 14:32
Chapter: The Gate

WOW!!!! Very cool and amazing and I was thrilled that he gets to get the professor!! Brilliant imagery!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/01/12 9:19
Chapter: The Gate

A philosophical chapter with an ending that promises plenty more action. Still a lot of threads to pull together, but this is great writing.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 08/20/12 20:36
Chapter: Weasley

Very nice twist...I had not expected Hermione at all.
This story is complicated and a bit thick to read and follow. Your use of detail is quite good, but also overwhelming at times. Be careful not to lose your reader along the way...

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/20/12 17:42
Chapter: Weasley

Go get 'em, Hermione.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/20/12 14:28
Chapter: Weasley

Brilliant! Just brilliant!

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