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Good to read another chapter.
I hope you update again soon!
You have slightly confused me with this chapter. Am I right in thinking this is before chapter three? Without reading the whole thing again, I am not sure of the time line.
It leaps from one action and set of characters to another and can be a bit difficult to follow. What I cannot do is miss any of it. A huge work.
Very complex. Unmissable.
Brilliant!! Amazingly brilliant!!
It was very exciting to read, but we now have one more twist in the plot.
I am left gasping for breath.
Brilliant as always!!
Some interesting history here, but meanwhile, back with Draco?
That was bloody brilliant!!!!
That was absolutely beautiful! I had tears as I read his heartfelt words to Tonks! Well done!!
WOW!!!! Very cool and amazing and I was thrilled that he gets to get the professor!! Brilliant imagery!!
A philosophical chapter with an ending that promises plenty more action. Still a lot of threads to pull together, but this is great writing.
Very nice twist...I had not expected Hermione at all.
This story is complicated and a bit thick to read and follow. Your use of detail is quite good, but also overwhelming at times. Be careful not to lose your reader along the way...