Reviews For Toads
Reviewer: foolondahill17
Date: 10/18/14 9:32
Chapter: Toads

Marvelously unique! Sirius wondering whether or not he should ever again live somewhere by his choice made me very sad. You're a really terrific writer. Your word-choice and sentence structure flow together so nicely. Thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Sirius is harder to write than he looks, and I'm not convinced I really got him right in this one. Perhaps I'll try again some time.

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 06/09/12 16:57
Chapter: Toads

I love it! Thoroughly enjoyably and most memorable piece of writing.


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 06/09/12 9:08
Chapter: Toads

A bit quirky, but very enjoyable.

Author's Response: This story was always going to be a bit strange, but it's encouraging that someone thought it came out all right.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/09/12 3:08
Chapter: Toads

This was wonderful read! I live how you described the toads singing and how very awesome to think Sirius might have had a few moments of peace after his escape! Love it! Well done!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It is, indeed, just a few moments of peace: Sirius doesn't actually get very far in this story, except inside his own head.

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