Great story; I can't wait to see where it leads. I really enjoy your writing style and characterisations. Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this. It's coming slowly and somewhat out-of-sequence, so once James and the gang decide to show up when I need them and not before or after, I'll have another chapter posted. Thanks for reading! ~ Megan
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. :-)
I love your story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for commenting. This is my opus, but it's coming in slow chunks, so I'll try to get this up as quick as my muses let me. ~ Megan
I liked the descriptions when you started off but somewhere on the train your details started rushing away in hast for the next event. It was fantastic, but please take your time. Love is all the more wonderful when you have to wait for it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the critique. I felt like it was descriptive overload at the start of the chapter, but I'll keep in mind what you said as I work on the rest of the story. ~ Megan
I like it!! Can't wait for your next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! ~ Megan
Yes! First review! I thought that this story was so believably written, it wouldn't surprise me if something like this were to happen. Great story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm writing them as fast as Lily and the gang let me, so hopefully chapter two will be up soon. I'm glad you enjoyed this. ~ Megan