Reviewer: InvestedWithNargles
Date: 07/11/12 0:23
Chapter: The Problem With Being Padfoot

I really, really liked this story for a few reasons, my first being the idea. It was a great idea, and it was perfectly executed. The characters, to me, were portrayed perfectly, and it was really easy to relate young Sirius to the Sirius he became. Your writing style was very good and it flowed really well. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this! I actually found it quite difficult to capture these characters properly, as it was my first Marauder fic, so I'm really glad you thought it was accurate! I did have fun writing it, though, and I loved writing James's dialogue!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/24/12 16:30
Chapter: The Problem With Being Padfoot

Wow! I laughed so hard when James burst into the shop! I loved the different perspectives you had in this story, and the idea was great! Sirius, not always great with women! I adored your characterizations, too. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I struggled a lot with this one, and I'm glad you thought I got the characterisation right!

Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/24/12 16:21
Chapter: The Problem With Being Padfoot

Hmmm cool...

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