Wow, I love it! Are the shadows like their fears dragging them down?
This was very sweet, I especially like the end. Happy endings are wonderful.
Author's Response: Happy endings ARE wonderful! :) Thank you for reading!
Its such a good story I really love it! You write so well! The concept behind it is so creative!;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
This was beautiful! Thank you so much for such a poetic piece. It was a great read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was fun to write! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
that was wonderful! i loved it
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad! :)
Really interesting - but a little bit jumpy (it moves too fast and is sometimes confusing).
BUT!! I liked your style, and improvement isn't impossible - but nobody is perfect.
Overall!! : WELL DONE, GOOD WORK:)! Xx
Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you for your review and criticism! I see what you mean with it being jumpy. I meant to write it that way, but it may be too much. I’m glad you still liked other aspects of the story. :) Thank you for reading!
That was good!!!(: You are very descriptive in this story which I like! Keep writing more stories because I want to read more!!!(:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try to come up with something else soon! :)