Sounds good so far. As a mature person, I'm beginning to wonder if I would've given up a lifelong friendship just because someone called me a name that was not politically correct in the heat of passion, so to speak. I've been called names before but I don't think it ever disturbed me so much that I refused to speak to someone for the rest of my life. Lily was young, though.
I'm glad ya'll started writing this again. It's a fun read. =)
If nothing could go wrong, why is this story called "AWRY"?
Author's Response: Because everything doesn't go to plan.
If Lily and James do not get together it will be very bad for the Harry Potter stories.
Author's Response: Haha we know... don't worry it's canon.
I'm loving this! :) Just one thing, maybe use 'mum' all the way through instead of mom and then mum. Just a suggestion to make it more British :)
Author's Response: Thanks! We'll definitely take that into consideration.