Reviews For Awry
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/24/14 16:00
Chapter: You Are Everything

Sounds good so far. As a mature person, I'm beginning to wonder if I would've given up a lifelong friendship just because someone called me a name that was not politically correct in the heat of passion, so to speak. I've been called names before but I don't think it ever disturbed me so much that I refused to speak to someone for the rest of my life. Lily was young, though.

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 07/24/14 12:01
Chapter: Prevaricator

I'm glad ya'll started writing this again. It's a fun read. =)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/27/12 7:48
Chapter: Concocting Alliances

If nothing could go wrong, why is this story called "AWRY"?

Author's Response: Because everything doesn't go to plan.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/26/12 12:37
Chapter: Deleteriousness

If Lily and James do not get together it will be very bad for the Harry Potter stories.

Author's Response: Haha we know... don't worry it's canon.

Reviewer: Luna432
Date: 07/14/12 21:01
Chapter: Deleteriousness

I'm loving this! :) Just one thing, maybe use 'mum' all the way through instead of mom and then mum. Just a suggestion to make it more British :)

Author's Response: Thanks! We'll definitely take that into consideration.

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