Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 04/19/13 1:23
Chapter: Lilies and Daisies

This is a sunny piece, even seen through the eyes of Snape. The lull between the storms. Although Snape hates crowds and shudders at the sight of so many children, his visit to Diagon Alley cannot help stirring up memories of a happier moment, like a kaleidoscope of colorful images from long ago. For a brief time, Snape leaves his demons behind to revel in remembrance of an afternoon with Lily in the excitement and wonder of a first visit to Diagon Alley and the anticipation of being a real wizard at Hogwarts with a real wand.

The author deftly changes Snape's mood throughout the story from distaste at first, when he entered Diagon Alley, to wistful heartache when he sees the little redheaded Muggleborn girl, to heartwarming reverie as he reminisces about that precious afternoon with Lily, while they were still friends. The mood changes abruptly, with finality, in only three words: "his father's rage".

It is easy to understand why he tries to will himself to forget the unforgettable. The pain of losing Lily and the pain of his father's abuse run so deep that he yearns to be free of them, even at the price of surrendering perhaps the only happiness he ever knew. And he does not foresee any happiness in his future. As the author says, "He knew what was to come." Survival is the best he can hope for, and for that he must keep his emotions strictly under control. Although seeing the little girl who reminds him of Lily was sudden and unexpected, It didn't throw him for a loop. He had steeled himself so well.

This piece is just a brief glimpse into Snape's thoughts and background, but it is enjoyable to read, and it makes the reader wonder what Snape could have become if he had survived the war. How much humanity was left, hidden in his heart?

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/30/12 19:43
Chapter: Lilies and Daisies

So cute! Sharing a few licks of ice cream! :) I really enjoyed this short fiction. I love it when people add more background to Snape! Keep it up!

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 06/30/12 17:17
Chapter: Lilies and Daisies

That was so sad! Your writing is always good, but this piece was especially beautiful. You depicted Snape's heartbreak and pain perfectly. "He couldn’t let his heart ache more than it already did." I never really thought about whether or not he would go to Diagon Alley with Lily, but now I see that it's obvious they would have :) The end of this also makes me wonder about Daisy, the little Muggleborn girl. I wonder what happened to her?

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