Interesting information coming from this chapter. Waiting for more.
Is this the real Moody? Plenty to go yet.
Author's Response: The Moody we see here is the same "Moody" that appears throughout the majority of Book 4. Namely, it's Crouch Jr. impersonating Moody.
Serena looks like being a very impressive character.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so. And thanks for reading :)
The Fred/George swap over at the end was beautifully down. Very funny and true to character. Though I am an enormous Snape fan, I'm presently a little puzzled as to what she does see in him, and why? How was she exposed to him? Is this a possible thread that you intend to follow?
Will there be any more flashbacks?
It's good, I'll keep reading and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The twins are so fun to write about; I love their personalities. I don't know if we'll be putting in anymore flashbacks per se, but we will be clearing up their present relationship a bit. And I do want to eventually go back and write about Serena and Kat's time at Hogwarts with Severus and Tyler, as well as the events leading up to the current story (a prequel, if you will). It's hard to say, because we're just making this up as we go along (it's our first time writing anything worthwhile). Thank you again for your review, and for reading :)
teehee! i want to see where this goes!
since it was short, i really dont have much to really say as to how ot improve it. when your next chapter comes out, i will have a better evaluation! keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is just waiting to be validated, so hopefully it'll be up soon. =]