Reviews For Her Eyes
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/02/12 21:08
Chapter: Her Eyes

Very good! I like that you have him acknowledging that harry was her precious son and that in death he would want him to know the full story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/02/12 20:26
Chapter: Her Eyes

I really enjoyed reading this in PA and now I still love it here! It's not too short! :) how did you get it updated so fast? My poem has been in the queue for nine days...
I especially enjoyed the last line- its comforting to know that he got to see her again after he died.

~Nagini Riddle

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the crit in PA. I also love to think that Severus gets to see Lily again. Even after she's gone, he dedicates his entire life to her.

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