Oh Sophie! This is brilliant! And so beautiful!
Author's Response: Good enough to make you review it twice, apparently! Thanks again, Nidhi :)
Wow! Amazing poem! I love the rythem!~Nidhi
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Nidhi :) I played with the rhythm quite a bit, so I'm glad you liked it.
Wow! I love the rhythm it had! I especially enjoyed how you wrote mem'ries!!!!!! Way to take out a syllable! That, right there, says poet to me!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, Nagini. Ellision (abbreviating a word like that) is very useful for making words fit into the meter, but I'm not sure that ellision a poet makes :P