Reviews For Redeeming The Past
Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 04/18/13 0:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi, Martha. I was fascinated to read your story because I saw in it a parallel with my own story "The Baby in the Closet," which deals with the same general topic but in a quite different manner. Your story (and the others you have posted) is very well-written and obviously well-thought-out. The prose is easy to read, fluid, with no awkward phrases or word choices that can have a jarring effect. You give an excellent feel for what it must have been like for both Eileen and Severus to live with a man who is a brute. One wonders, "Why did Eileen marry him?' but we all know of cases of men who were charming before marriage and sorry excuses for husbands afterwards.

Severus strongly resisted opening up his thoughts to his wife, his business partner, or the American Healers. I get the feeling that he is resisting the readers also. There must have been more to his childhood story than this one incident that he remembers in the Pensieve. The paternal abuse was surely ongoing, spanning many years, much of which he always remembered. Does he think that by reliving this brutal scene from his infancy his problems will be cured? Does he have the strength to explore this issue as it needs to be explored, or will he pull back, close up, and hunker down again?

It is not unreasonable to posit that Snape could recover enough from the horrors of his childhood and young adulthood to rebuild an outwardly-seeming normal life (Holocaust survivors come to mind), but the damage to the psyche will probably never completely heal.

Interesting take on this topic, focused on the Magical aspects. Read my story and tell me what you think of it.

Vicki

Author's Response:

Hi Vicki. I was so happy to see your review. It's been a while since anyone has responded to this story.

I wanted to reply to you right away, but RL has kept me busy for the last 4 or 5 days. I did read your story The Baby in the Closet, and found that it did hit some of the same chords as mine. Your descriptions of the places in your story are very well done, and as realistic as if you’d actually been there. (That is one area where I struggle with my writing.)

I think that Harry and Snape’s basic personalities affect the way each of them confront issues from their pasts. Harry is younger and more open-minded, whereas Snape has had to stuff his emotions for so long that he’s very resistant to examining or, for that matter, having anyone else look into what makes him tick.

I have my story up on another site, and some of the readers there have also asked me why Snape seems to be cured after looking at only one memory, and if I plan to write more. As you said, there is so much more to his childhood memories than can be covered in just one story, but hopefully I have left him in a place where, along with the love and support of those close to him, he can continue to heal.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/22/12 5:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant! Just brilliant!! I never once thought about who he was married to until you revealed her! Great job! And very deep story. I wish that spell was available in real life!

Author's Response: I've never had any of my work called 'brilliant' before - and I think I like it! This was a little different than some of the other things I've written. I'm so glad that it resonated with you. Many thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 07/21/12 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story.

Author's Response: Thanks 😊

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