This is really good! I think it also totally would have worked as a much longer, chaptered story, but you made the short length work quite nicely. I really liked the characters, and how you expressed them. I would also love to hear more about them, is there any way you would consider writing a sequel, this time a longer story?

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you for your review! I am currently writing a sort of prequel to it for another one of my prompts and a sort of sequel for another. Unfortunately, they will both only be one-shots as I have three days to write both of them! Maple