There's a minimum!!???
Anyways, beautiful poetry. I love the sounds this produced, and clocks can be fun to listen to- and sometimes annoy me. :) But this was great!
Author's Response: Yes, 100 words minimum. Bleh. And thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
Haha, I know how you feel. Lovely poem!
Author's Response: (:
OOOOH - eeeeerieeeee.
Very atmospheric, minna. I love the inevitability here of the clock ticking, and then the chime - which I guess represents Andromeda because she was the daughter out of sync with the other two. Very clever. And incredible strong imagery here - the blackout curtain, the fledgeling's hungry call. Fabulous.
Author's Response: Yeah, the chime is supposed to be Andromeda, hehe. (And the fledgling Tonks, but I suck at making myself clear in this poem/too much symbolism instead of saying things!) Thanks for the lovely review <3