Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/30/12 6:20
Chapter: Poem

There's a minimum!!???
Anyways, beautiful poetry. I love the sounds this produced, and clocks can be fun to listen to- and sometimes annoy me. :) But this was great!

Author's Response: Yes, 100 words minimum. Bleh. And thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/22/12 23:33
Chapter: Poem

Haha, I know how you feel. Lovely poem!


Author's Response: (:

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 07/22/12 7:54
Chapter: Poem

OOOOH - eeeeerieeeee.

Very atmospheric, minna. I love the inevitability here of the clock ticking, and then the chime - which I guess represents Andromeda because she was the daughter out of sync with the other two. Very clever. And incredible strong imagery here - the blackout curtain, the fledgeling's hungry call. Fabulous.


Author's Response: Yeah, the chime is supposed to be Andromeda, hehe. (And the fledgling Tonks, but I suck at making myself clear in this poem/too much symbolism instead of saying things!) Thanks for the lovely review <3

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