Reviews For Lucky
Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/23/12 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Okay. So, before reading this story, I absolutely HATED Lily/Scorpius, and only read stories like this to give it a chance. Well, you changed my mind. I just read your most recent story (I forget what it was called, but it was another Lily/Scorpius) and that combined with this one did the trick. I am still not a huge fan of them together, but I'm not completely against it now.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you! You have no idea how much this means to me :) Maple

Reviewer: Redwing
Date: 07/22/12 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmmmm. I like the premise of this, but I think that you're doing yourself a disservice. You have some good ideas about your characters, but everything is "telling" the audience about what happened instead of showing them. Maybe you should consider expanding - maybe write a chapter showing each of those major points in their relationship?

Author's Response: Honestly, that was one of the things I was least disatisfied with in this story. But I had less than a week to write 6 one-shots. So a lot of these moments have been expanded in other one-shots. (hint hint) Thank you for your review! Maple

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 07/20/12 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww. I write Scorose, but I do love a well written Scilily. And I like the twins' names.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I spent a lot of time googling constellations :p

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/20/12 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Geez, you certainly love Lily don't you?
This was so sweet! How did Harry take the news that his daughter was marrying Scorpius????? :)
Very nice! I loved it. :D

Author's Response: Ahaha, SPEW007 makes us write about one character only :) As for Harry, I don't really think he cared. In my head canon, Harry no longer hates Draco. They aren't friends, but he doesn't hate him. Thanks for the reviewwww! Maple

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