Wow. This was amazing. I Siriusly (lame pun intended) love everything you've written, and this is no exception! The way you write is beautiful and haunting here, and both of them together . . . amazing! I especially loved this line,
"Refusal is the art of cold-blood, the art of pride as my eyes seek out coveted treasure
Refusal is the art of treachery, the art of spurning as my nimble fingers steal without measure"
So beautifully written! I wish I could write like you! Please keep up the brilliant work, your writing is a gift!
Author's Response: Wow! You have just made my day with that lovely review! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. Your writing is beautiful, too, Cailee! :) And I will be sure to keep writing.