Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 10/20/13 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 7- Quintapeds and Quidditch Trials

I really like Valeria's character. Though she was raised in the Malfoys, she isn't stiff or snobby and is actually rather sweet. I also love the way she treats Draco. She really puts him in his place, and he knows it.

Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 09/01/13 2:45
Chapter: Chapter 7- Quintapeds and Quidditch Trials

Wow- that girl has influence! Love seeing all the potter characters from the views of their older siblings!

Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 06/30/13 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 5- Secrets

Nice story - it has that moreish quality that marks good writing. You obviously have plans for where this story is going, but it's great that you aren't rushing it: it's been worth spending a few chapters with this character first.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/26/13 13:27
Chapter: Chapter 6- Friendship and Strife

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 01/25/13 23:20
Chapter: Prologue

Dad is right. This is a very good story and deserves more reviews. The writing is graceful, the details greatly enrich the story, the characterization is well done, and the plot is intriguing. I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the complimentary review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/08/12 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 5- Secrets

This is a good story with a different and interesting character, It deserves more reviews.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/14/12 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 4- A Good Slytherin

Interesting sorting.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/24/12 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 2- The Black Walnut Wand

Now I can see where this story ys going.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll try and post another chapter soon.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/23/12 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 2- The Black Walnut Wand

I'm hooked!

Reviewer: MetamorphmagusLupin
Date: 09/16/12 1:39
Chapter: Chapter 1- Birthday Entertainment

I'm really intrigued by this story. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/02/12 21:19
Chapter: Prologue

Y am a bit confused by the character, but I will follow with interest.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope things become clearer later on. If you have a question, just ask.

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