Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 10/23/13 20:57
Chapter: Dolores Umbridge sentenced to Life!

This is a good idea. It's very interesting to hear what happens after the war in terms of news. All this gossip about Umbridge is great as well. It really explains a lot of her actions, and works well with canon.

If you are still writing articles, I think it would be interesting to hear on about Rita Skeeter. I never did find out what happened to her …

Great job!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/11/12 20:16
Chapter: Dolores Umbridge sentenced to Life!

Enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Hello Dad, not having a 'dad', I get a kick out of replying to your reviews with that opener! And I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for R & R-ing, M ;)

Reviewer: Ribe featherquill
Date: 09/11/12 19:25
Chapter: Dolores Umbridge sentenced to Life!

Just to be clear about this: I'm not sure about this. I think I remember that Kingsly only was a member of the Order under the second war, I believe that both him and Tonks were new. And two orders? I would rather say that it's the same order, just reworken, seeing that the living members of order from the first war also is fighting in the second war.

Well done. The cuts are a bit longer than in the books, but the style is the close as I remember it. The subject are very well chosen.

Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Hello Ribe featerquill, naturally, it was one Order, though two versions. I just assumed everyone would understand that. You're quite right about Kingsley just being in the second version - a slip opn my part I've now corrected, thanks for that ;) Glad you enjoyed it otherwise, and thanks for R & R-ing, Kara's Aunty ;)

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