Reviewer: choccake
Date: 12/30/12 8:18
Chapter: Prologue

Interesting - I really like it! Just out of interest: where did the mage idea come from? Was it your own or did something inspire you? (sorry, I'm awfully nosey)

Author's Response: Hm, you know I'm not sure? This fic has been in the works for so long... I think I just wanted a step up from wizardry and I picked a name. And there's no need to apologise, it's always flattering when someone shows an interest in your writing - I only wish I could give you a more articulate answer! Thank you for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :) HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/29/12 16:54
Chapter: Flames

That could be a problem.

Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks for reviewing :) HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/28/12 22:57
Chapter: Explanations

I love this story!! Just so you know!!

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you so much!! :D I really appreciate it :) :) HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/28/12 12:06
Chapter: Explanations

I got to read two chapters in one day.

Author's Response: Double review is double the appreciation. :D HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/28/12 12:05
Chapter: Explanations

I got to read two chapters in one day.

Author's Response: Hahaha, well that can't be a bad thing :) Thanks! HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/28/12 8:44
Chapter: Defence

More and more interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) The next chapter has just gone up. Sorry for the big delay where I didn't post for a while; RL kind of ate my time. HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/13/12 17:27
Chapter: Attack

The last two chapters more or less painted a picture of normal student life. I suspect that may be about to change.

Author's Response: You may well be right... thanks for reviewing (again!). :) HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/30/12 15:45
Chapter: Transition

I have not got a clue where this is going, but I will keep following it.

Author's Response: Then I appreciate your support all the more! :) Thanks. HK

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 10/10/12 14:15
Chapter: Introductions

It is confusing, but very good at the same time. An index with the charactors might be helpful.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's good despite the confusion. I have my own index of characters, as well as a family tree; at the moment I'm trying to work out a way of putting it online for my readers and I've not really come up with anything yet. When I do, I'll put the links in :) Thanks so much for reviewing! HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/10/12 1:50
Chapter: Introductions


Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/04/12 15:22
Chapter: Progress

Ooooo sounds fishy with Eric!! Fantastic!

Author's Response: *pleased* It does indeed, doesn't it? Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/04/12 14:32
Chapter: Progress

Somewhere out there is a mage, but why ill treat children?

Author's Response: Mmmm, why indeed. :) Thanks for reviewing again :) HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/28/12 11:06
Chapter: Found

I am literally just sitting here sobbing! Well done!

Author's Response: I'm torn between apologising for making you cry and being glad it had such a powerful effect! :) Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it. Am just sticking the next chapter in the queue. HK

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/28/12 10:31
Chapter: Found

It is difficult to follow because we do not know what is going on. We can only wait and see.

Author's Response: This is true. I didn't realise how confusing this could be until I split it up into chapters. Hopefully it'll be much less confusing the more I get posted :) Thanks for reviewing, and for following me from SIYE! HK

Reviewer: Seedy
Date: 09/23/12 18:42
Chapter: Lost

A little hard to follow.....hope next update is soon and with explanations.

Author's Response: The hard to follow thing is one of my main concerns. All three parts together, this story is around 110k long, so it's kind of a monster and it wasn't actually originally written in chapters - so there's a lot going on. The next chapter is in the moderation queue, which I believe is seven days at the moment. Please do let me know if there's any specific improvements you think I could make to make it clearer at any point :) Thank you for sticking with the story and leaving me another review! HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/23/12 15:15
Chapter: Lost

Simply brilliant. A little hard to follow, I found myself adding up dates as I went along but I love it!

Author's Response: *blushs* Thank you. I am a little concerned about it being hard to follow, as it is quite a complicated piece of fic. I'm glad the dates were there to help you! They're not absolutely necessary, more there for anyone who needs the time frame. Thanks for reviewing (again!). :) HK

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/23/12 3:29
Chapter: Prologue

This is fascinating!!

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you think so! Thanks for reviewing :D HK

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 09/16/12 23:08
Chapter: Prologue

Intriguing! Very nice use of dialogue, accompanied by crisp, descriptive writing.
Good job! I look forward to parts 2 and 3.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've submitted chapter one of part one, so that should be up in... I think the mod queue is about seven days at the moment. I'm glad you enjoyed it, that you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Seedy
Date: 09/16/12 22:26
Chapter: Prologue

I like it....but i thought Harry would've been a lot more secure...or hostile towards the ministry, especially Scrimgeour.

Author's Response: I think you've got a good point. I guess I think that at this point Harry's more fed up with them than anything! Thanks for taking the time to review, I'm glad you liked it :)

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Harry Potter and the Sinister Plot by weasley-malfoy-aficionado 3rd-5th Years
Patrolling the streets of Hogsmeade one snowy day Ron encounters an unexpected...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
Have You No Idea That You're In Deep by littlebird Professors
"The problem, as Harry sees it, is he simply wasn't prepared."
Come Home by WrenWinterSong 1st-2nd Years
Three year old Teddy Lupin ponders the photographs on the living room side table.
But You Haven't Lost Me Yet by Dawnie 6th-7th Years
The war with Voldemort comes and goes, and James and Lily find themselves struggling...
broken brights by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
Harry's breath catches when he thinks of Ginny. I am not JK Rowling and...