Reviews For The Autumn Air
Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/21/12 13:45
Chapter: The Autumn Air

Some very atmospheric writing here. Nice little gem.

Author's Response: I am flattered to hear that. Thank you so much for your review. ;)

Reviewer: alex13
Date: 09/21/12 2:30
Chapter: The Autumn Air

Wow! Just wow! You convey emotions an imagery very, very well! It's very well written and a very good story! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!! Your review just made my day. ;)

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/21/12 0:00
Chapter: The Autumn Air

I love this- perfectly angsty and resolved. I was wondering if you'd think that Lily's boggart would also be James dead later (something like Mrs. Weasley's)? or if it would stay on just Harry? same for James, but only if the boggart would become Harry or Sirius or Remus or Peter. I think that Lily and James's boggarts are very well chosen, either way- it says a lot about them.

One spelling nitpick- '“It’ll be aright, Lily."' should be alright, correct?

Very good job, I'll be looking forward to whatever you have next! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm sure it would have later become a dead James, but I didn't want to drag out the scene! :)

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