I love your work ! Your stories are so realistic and beautifully written! I've read trickster and stars apart too and i think this yours are the best James/Lily Fics I've read yet ! Please update soon :(
I love this story, please update soon
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! if you dont update soon, ill cry.
Thanks for the laugh today I need it! Loved this chapter. 😃please update soon!
I really enjoyed the broomstick discussion between James & Lily, it was perfect James being obsessed with the broomstick and Lily complaining about the cold. But I'm not sure what I thought about the Will part, he's really portrayed as not so nice person. Had the feeling that he felt something more than attraction to Lily, but their conversion made wondering if it really was so.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Lily does sort of attract assholes, doesn't she ;)
Please update! I love this story!
Author's Response: It's coming!! I was on holiday hiatus haha. But the next chapter will be put in queue tonight or tomorrow :)
IhI seem to have missed this story, so just read it today. Great re-action and dialogue between the characters.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Let me just say that this whole series is my favorite James/Lily story. So many that I've read seemed too rushed or unrealistic. But yours makes sense, and is written wonderfully. You have a real grasp on each character and this is expressed through the dialouge as well as narration. I can't wait for the next update! I do however, have just one question regarding Dorcas Medows's age. I think that she's a member of the "older' Order group, but I'm not completely sure. If you could just clear that up, it would be great! Happy writing!
Author's Response: thanks!! the next chapter was put in queue a couple of days ago, so it should be up soon :) dorcas is one of those characters in the hp books who was mentioned super briefly and never really elaborated on, so there's some freedom with her...for the purposes of this story, though, she's kind of in between. she wasn't in school with any of the marauder-era guys, so she's about ten years older than they are, but she's not as old as dumbledore/mcgonnagal/moody etc
I love this story! I have stuck through with it since Trickseter. Please contine you it. I know you dont have a lot of reviews but dont let that discourage you. I know lots of people who dont have an accont and wait for updates. I made an acoont because i love this story so much! Cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: aw, thanks! the next chapter was put in queue a few days ago, should be out soon!
Loved this chapter!! So creative! How do you come up with this stuff???? Cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! Every time a story of yours is updated it makes me smile! :) have a good weekend!
I had been waiting for weeks for you to post something underneath James/lily. I was so sad cause I didn't see anything but now I'm happy that I finally found it when I went to stars apart to re-read it. Loving this story right now! My username is out of date now :) I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: aha i couldn't decide! it's totally a marauder story but i kinda think i should move it over to james/lily cuz that's what the other two are....sigh. but thanks so much, the next chapter is already in queue!! glad to have you back :)
Yay! I'm so glad that you posted this story so quickly! This is a really great, though melancholy, start and I can't wait to read the rest! Great work!!!
I love the opening with Sirius as a dog. And I liked the chapter overall but I puzzle about the description of The Prewets, they're Molly's brothers, thus should be red haired. Or did I miss something?
Author's Response: thanks!! and haha aren't they? I guess I consider strawberry blondes redheads, but it's totally possible that i just have no grasp of what names of hair colors actually mean
OH, this is fabulous. I think Stars Apart was one of the first things I read on the archives, when I still had a huge love for James/Lily. I've moved on a bit since then, except for your fics, which aren't perfect by any means but do get me caught up in the story--and that's why you're one of my favourite authors.
I love, love, love the way that you use dialogue--you seem to have a real grasp on it, which I'm slightly jealous of, hehe. It's what makes the story amazing for me, that use of dialogue. Because while straight narrative prose can be nice, you somehow have a grasp on both.
Like I said, this story isn't perfect, but it has very few flaws. I love how you're NOT rushing the story--you're letting it go at its own pace, which makes everything seem much more realistic.
This is by no means a SPEW review but I do adore this story and I hope updates come, um, slightly faster :P
Author's Response: ahaaa i know everything went to hell in a handbasket last year when it came to timely reviews. but don't worry i did write a lot of it in advance this time, so the next chapter is all ready to be queued up! and thank you so much for the lovely review. i have no idea where my own james/lily obsession started, but it's still going strong, and it's nice to know that people are still with me :)
Wow, wonderful. A great start to the end of a fantastic series! I love how everything just ties together so perfectly, and while the death of J/L's parents is sad, it also sets the mood perfectly- as James and Sirius said, they are all orphans now.
This is going to be great, and I can't wait for the next update! :D :D :D
Author's Response: thanks :) i'm pretty excited to write this one. aiming for weekly updates right now, so the next chapter'll be in queue by the weekend!