Reviews For Snape's Interlude
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/27/13 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 11 End of Term

That was a great story. I enjoyed reading it. It was well written so even though I thought your Snape wasn't entirely accurate it was still good storytelling. Very sad how it all happened. I'll read the follow-ups and then your work in progress.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Fynnsmom. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and hope you enjoy the others as well.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/27/13 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 10 Cruel to Be Kind

That is just too bad. Severus did tell her that the whole affair would never be permanent. I also think Dumbledore had a point in that Winnie should play a part in the decision. I hope she wasn't trying to get pregnant.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/27/13 11:31
Chapter: Chapter 9 Shadows

You had lulled me into thinking that Winnie would be safe. I forgot what Voldemort could do. Why oh why did she reverse her birth control charm.

Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments-- it's so nice to get some! You made some good points, but seem to be enjoying the story anyway. I'm glad.:)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 8 His Dark Secret

I'm still surprised that Winnie never noticed Severur's Dark Mark--even if they were in the dark all the time. Unless it's totally black in the room, your eyes would eventually adjust and you'd be able to see things. I understand that it's part of the story though:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 7 Sweet Oblivion

I think that just having Severus read to me would make me feel better.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 6 The Holidays

I hope Trelawney's wrong. She's rarely right but you don't want the time that she's right to affect you. It's always embarrassing when someone hears you talking about them:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 5 Taking Care of Business

To be honest, I don't know how someone can spend this much time having sex--everyday? I think I'd get tired after a while and slow it down to 3-4 days a week:D Don't get me wrong. I'm not complaining about the story.

Author's Response: :) Really? I don't think so, not at this point in their relationship.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 13:19
Chapter: Chapter 4 The Question Game

Of course Dumbledore knew exactly what she wanted:D You are certainly showing a different side of Snape. I think it's true that we never know exactly what happens behind closed doors--when people are vulnerable and their true selves.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 12:52
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Boggart

Very interesting. I wonder how Winifred will feel when she finds out some of the things Severus has done. Or will she understand when Voldemort summons him? By this time Severus should have the Dark Mark. It seems odd that she doesn't have any questions about that unless she's very polite and doesn't want to cause any trouble.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 12:10
Chapter: Chapter 2 Ghosts of the Past

Looks like Dumbledore is matchmaking again--or maybe I should say meddling. I never thought about Snape's wanting to be the DADA teacher that way before--that Dumbledore was afraid to lose him because the position was cursed.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/26/13 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 1 A New Teacher

I suppose Winifred could assign a lot of homework and then spend her spare time grading papers:D I was going to start reading your new story and then remembered that I had written this story down as one to read so I thought I'd start with this one. Snape is my favorite character in the Harry Potter universe. I love stories when he falls in love. So far so good.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/03/12 5:35
Chapter: Chapter 11 End of Term

I was a good story, but I must admit it never felt like the real Snape. Well done anyway.

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: Lilliessevered
Date: 11/18/12 1:03
Chapter: Chapter 1 A New Teacher

Such a great story.... I feel bad he will hurt her.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/12/12 11:43
Chapter: Chapter 8 His Dark Secret

I am starting to wonder how you are going to end this.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/07/12 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 6 The Holidays

I am beginning to wonder (even more) how this story will end.

Author's Response: Good. I hope you'll keep reading. Things will change...

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/29/12 6:23
Chapter: Chapter 4 The Question Game

Interesting story nut I am having difficulty in believing in this Snape.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/21/12 8:29
Chapter: Chapter 3 A Boggart

Is this the Snape we know and love?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/24/12 19:34
Chapter: Chapter 1 A New Teacher

I wish there was more. I feel I just got started on a good story and it's over:D Good job.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/24/12 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 1 A New Teacher

Interesting start. Snapr does not seem very nasty.

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