I read this two times, and both times I find it amazing. I really like how you describe Rose's feelings, especially when she's angry with Nott. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's about Lucy, right?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This meant a lot. Actually, the next chapter features Lily!
this is really good! is it going to focus more on rose or lucy?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This story will switch POV every chapter, mostly between Rose, Lucy, and Lily, though the majority of the focus is on Rose and Scorpius. There will be a few chapters with other POVs (though I won't say who yet...), but these three cousins will have the most chapters. (This is a technique I am trying out for the first time since I just had so much plot that it was impossible to stick with just one POV, so please let me know what you think of the switching POVs in coming chapters!)
My fic just got rejected:( I do hope you get into the college you want.
I loved it!!! Please don't disappear :(. I just discovered Secret Lily has stopped writing 'Nutty as a Fruitcake' since 2006, I panicked and clicked the contact author button. She's not mailing me back though:( I love your stories too, the way you form your stories, the way you make the details, everything!!! If you get to be a writer, please let me know!!!
P.S. Pleeeze don't disappear like she did, what am I supposed to live on??? I might go crazy!!!
Author's Response: I promise not to disappear! :) I don't get quite as much time to write as I would like, and I blame going to college for an education on that, haha. I've been working very hard on this next chapter and hopefully I'll have it done before the end of January. And I'll keep an eye out for your fic as well and read it when I can. :)
I absolutely love it! Please continue writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I will! :)
A bit too girly for me. I thought this was about Scorpius?
Author's Response: This chapter was a bit fluffy, but keep in mind it is from the perspetive of fourteen year old Lucy. And, yes, the main story is about Rose trying to figure Scorpius out, but to help break up the tension between those two (which can be a bit overbearing and depressing to write and, I'm guessing, to read), some of the chapters are in the perspectives of other cousins who are not dealing with these darker themes. I don't want to give anything away, but I will let you know that the next chapter is Rose's POV. I'd also like to add that I am trying to provide a story that will be interesting for everyone, which does result in a few chapters that not everyone will be totally thrilled with. As the story progresses, though, it will get darker as more things are revealed, but I really can't say anymore. I hope you enjoy the next chapter more. :)
So far this is really great, but that may be a biased opinion because I love anything with the Potter and Weasley kids. But you have really great writing skills and your words flow together whereas most other people have choppy sentences. So good job there. Keep writing please!
Author's Response: This really made my night! (2013 is starting out to be a great year) I promise to keep this story going until the end, so no worries there. The next chapter is in the queue as we speak, so it will be ready to read in the next couple of days. Thank you for the review!
You've set up the mystery surrounding Scorpius quite nicely. I'm intrigued enough to follow the story to its end. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! This means a lot to me since it means that I have done my job as a writer. I promise not to disappoint!
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I should have the next chapter up in less than a week!
It started to take off once they got on the train.
Author's Response: And the real story hasn't even begun yet... :)