Reviewer: Abegne
Date: 07/21/14 18:59
Chapter: Birds and Bees and Dragons

Lovely story. Your Severus makes a great father. Glad to hear a bit about Elizabeth and Severus ' relationship.
You do know children very well.It shows.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 12/31/13 2:08
Chapter: Birds and Bees and Dragons

Time for another review. I won’t go into all the usual stuff about your delightful writing style etc. etc. etc. I am just writing as a mother and a grandmother who sees her own beloved children so perfectly reflected in your depiction of Zoe, I feel all choked up just to read it. And in your depiction of Snape as a parent, I relive my own feelings and experiences when taking care of my own children. Maybe all of us parents feel these things, we know what it is like, but the art is to be able to put those feelings, those observations, those tiny bits of behavior and looks on faces, those little whispered words into a story. You have succeeded admirably.

You describe yourself in your bio as a “twenty-something”, but I think you must have children of your own, to be able to write this topic so perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews! I am so glad that you are enjoying my stories. I'm curious if you have wandered into any of the others (I know you enjoyed The Art of Communication) :) I am a "twenty-something", for sure. I turned 28 back in October, though I initially started to write this story about three years ago. I have to say, I actually do not have any children of my own, though I'd desperately love to in the future. I DO, however, have a four-year-old niece who inspires me a lot as well as several young cousins and second cousins who I also draw ideas from. Other than that, I try to pull a little bit from things I remember from being a child and I observe the interactions of parents I see. And I read A LOT of child psychology articles and books, as well, which is kind of nerdy, but fascinating at the same time. Research is definitely by friend when writing. I have to say that I immensely enjoyed getting the two reviews you have left so far. I haven't received any on this site in quite a while, so it was a lovely treat to see the review notification in my inbox. If you haven't yet, definitely check out my other stories. My WIP, "It's All For You", is steadily being updated. Thanks again! MetamorphmagusLupin

Reviewer: Aridan
Date: 03/15/13 23:16
Chapter: Birds and Bees and Dragons

I'm in love with Zoe!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like her! I happen to have a lot of affection for her as well. ;)

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 12/08/12 6:12
Chapter: Birds and Bees and Dragons

This was a most magically perfect story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And thanks so much for your review! Keep an eye out, I have another story in the queue just waiting to be validated.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 12/08/12 5:55
Chapter: Seashells and Blank Walls

What a chapter! Thank you.

Reviewer: Hotshot1
Date: 11/26/12 22:26
Chapter: A Change of Plans

I was wandering if there is going to be another story after this.

Author's Response: Yes, there is actually one final chapter to this story once I can get it past the mods. They have a few issues with it, but I'm working on making it acceptable. There are also several more stories (I call them glimpses) into the lives of Severus and Zoe just waiting to be submitted into the queue. Thanks so much for your question! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long. MetamorphmagusLupin

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/01/12 0:01
Chapter: Seashells and Blank Walls

Awwwwwww!! Have I said I love this yet? I love this!!!!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 10/29/12 0:10
Chapter: A Change of Plans

If only Severus knew what it's like to travel such distances with a child via Muggle means! That would certainly test his patience with Zoe... (hint, hint!)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/28/12 19:01
Chapter: A Change of Plans

As always seeing your Severus in daddy mode just makes me smile from ear to ear!!! Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love getting your reviews!

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