Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 12/05/12 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have. And I got to say that this is way better than the story I read the other day about how Remus got bitten. That one was cheerful and not right, while this one was cheerful at the beginning then got dark, which is more accurate in my eyes. I love Remus and I love your poems about him! :D


Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to respond! I've been busy. As for your review, I am eternally grateful for it! I hope you continue to find things that you enjoy reading. ;)

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 11/08/12 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was beautiful- I love the tribute (I don't know why, but I HAVE to call him "Lupin") I really liked meeting him in the books, and I've always appreciated how Lupin manages to stay afloat. He's quite emotionally strong, to be truthful.

The speed (bad word choice, but I'm brain dead) of the ending, from "A red gleam appeared" to "Overshadowed him..." is amazing, and it takes my breath away. Keep up the good work! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you! :) When I said reviews would be nice, I just meant that I enjoyed seeing some reviews from you and wouldn't mind more. And I really enjoyed seeing that you liked this poem! I can't believe that practically my entire author page is made up of poems- only about four or five stories are actually stories, which makes e laugh a bit. I am a little on the poetic nut side. :D Thanks again for your review! ~Nagini

Reviewer: alex13
Date: 11/02/12 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Poor Remus!! This was an amazing poem! A.great tribute to Remus! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Have a nice Friday!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 1st-2nd Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
Gelido Dormitabis (An Icy Slumber) by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
A poetic look at the oppressive sleep of the Inferi within the icy cave.Written...
A Christmas Choice by coolh5000 3rd-5th Years
After working late one Christmas Eve and missing yet another day out with his...
Winter at the Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The winter solstice, the shortest, harshest days of the year. Would you have...
A Passing Fancy by HalfASlug 1st-2nd Years
The Yule Ball is on the horizon and Neville knows only one girl that he wants...
Four Christmases by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva attempts to teach Severus Occlumency and perhaps something more.