You don't need criticism to make your poems better because your already an expert! :D
Author's Response: You are too kind. But thank you for the compliment! I still expect to see some form of a review... No pressure. ;)
Hi Nagini! Great poem! Is this about Harry and Ginny? It seems like it could be during the Horcrux hunt. Anyways great poem! :)
Author's Response: actually, its about sev/lily, but i suppose your interpretation works. :) thanks for the review.