Reviewer: MichelleWeasley2000
Date: 11/19/12 17:33
Chapter: The Liberation of Narcissa Malfoy

Wow, nice job. There are a few typos that you might want to fix, but otherwise, well done.

Reviewer: Redwing
Date: 11/18/12 10:32
Chapter: The Liberation of Narcissa Malfoy

I think this is really great. It *sounds* like Narcissa - you really captured her. My only nitpick is near the end where you used "it's" instead of "its" (should be: "who even knows if it will survive if it caught its father's condition"), and I was surprised that Narcissa would ever mention Muggle characters, or deign to have read the books they come from. Other than those, great fic!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/18/12 9:48
Chapter: The Liberation of Narcissa Malfoy

Very gloomy subject. Well written, but not fun to read.

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