I really like this pairing, and you totally did it justice.
You definitely did it justice! One of my favorite pairings, and not one that is done a whole lot. Nice work.
Very nicely done, Graceful writing, and a more complex treatment of the subject than the usual romance fic. Life is complex, and this fic seems to capture that.
Author's Response: Thank you, Oregonian. This pairing is quite complex. I just wanted to sculpt out a believable scenario and three dimensional characters. I'm glad you feel the fic suceeded.
Thank you so much for reading and for the review!
This is lovely: a nice balance of interaction, intrigue, and background. Readers new to HP would not catch the references from the books, which makes this story very special to those who have become attached to the characters from the early years. Great job.
Author's Response: Hi, baby54boomer!
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and for the review!
When I started this I thought the writing was very descriptive but the plot was a bit jerky. By the end I was cheering them on.
Author's Response: Plot? What plot? Nothing here but a big mush of feelings with the tiniest drop of character study. But I'm glad I eventually sucked you in, all the same. :-)
Thanks for reading, Dad! And thank you for the review.