Reviews For Finding Neverland
Reviewer: Eleanor Lupin
Date: 01/23/13 16:24
Chapter: (on the ledge)

WOW. Ellie, this is a gorgeous fic. I really felt so strongly for Lucy during this whole thing - I was right with her throughout. It was an undeniably dark fic, but there were so many different kinds of darkness to it that it was really great to read. The thing about the ledge was such a brilliant touch - that her life meant so little to her that she was willing to walk across ledges just for fun.

Normally, I wouldn't read a fic like this, since next-gen D/A usually isn't my thing, (even written by the queen of next-gen D/A), but I'm so, so glad I did. :) Great fic.

Author's Response: Nora <33333. I'm blushing so much right now.

I'm so glad you liked it. I know it was a very dark fic, but it follows the Yellow Knit Hat canon. :) I'm glad it didn't scare you off, but the ledge is actually where I got the idea. I knew the beginning and the end of the fic, but I had no idea what was going to happen in the middle when I wrote it. I guess it spiraled down pretty quickly. I know it's not a fic most would read, (and *blushes blushes blushes*) but I am really glad you gave it a chance! Thank you so much for the amazing review!

Ellie

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/22/13 5:21
Chapter: (on the ledge)

Powerful writing but even given the ending I found it very bleak and depressing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm sorry you didn't like it, but it at least was slightly less heavy than Yellow Knit Hat. Thanks again for the review!

Ellie

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