Nice job displaying a "quick-witted tongue" by using phrases that flow quickly off the tongue with alliteration and rhyme. Closing the poem with a sly smile makes the relationship real, human - not just an idealization. Good stuff.
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! I was not expecting any reviews- and then yours showed up, and I had skipping puppies within my stomach. I am excited that you enjoyed it. :) Keep reading!