I like it.
i really liked it :) very good characterization of fleur.
Hi this is very sweet. I love the gentle progression of their relationship and how it unfolds through the diary entries and the letter Bill sends her. i think you caught a very loving side of Fleur, which fits very well with the girl we see at the end of HBP and in DH.
You have your dates wrong, though. Bill and Fleur were seeing each other by the end of OOTP and the beginning on HBP (that's when she's at the Burrow) so their first date would be at least a year earlier (1996) .