When I first read this poem on the beta boards, I was amazed. Like, jaw droppingly amazed. The way you divide it into the five senses is so creative. I love it.
So basically, all I'm saying is that it's awesome and amazing and wonderful. One of my favorite poems ever.
I should stop gushing now:)
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you for such a nice review! :D You know, I was so worried I wouldn't have the poem done in time for the exchange deadline--the five senses thing meant that writing it took a lot longer than usual...but I'm glad I wrote it that way. And I'm also really glad you like it!