This is very good. I like the way you drew Angelina's personality and her compications with the twins.
Author's Response: Thank you. This is one of a series of George/Angelina stories, the others are April Fool, and Angelina. -N-
I like your interpretation of the Fred-Angelina-George situation. :) You did really well getting inside a teenage girls head.
Author's Response: Thank you. I’ve been slowly working through the Fred-Angelina-George triangle, and I’m happy with the timeline I’ve given them. -N-
Good to hear more of Angelina and the twins back story.
(The reggae "Spotted cow" does exist I just can't find a copy.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the confirmation that my memory isn’t as bad as I feared. -N-
I really loved the first year twins scenario. Lovely story. Er, what did Cho do to Angelina at the Yule Ball?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Cho did nothing, other than be Seeker for an opposing team, and go to the ball with Cedric. -N-
Another great story from viewpoint of Angelina. Hope you keep writing. I'm looking forward for you to update your other stories too. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I’m currently working on a couple of updates, and another new one-shot. -N-