Reviews For The Seasons Change
Reviewer: The Worldjumper
Date: 07/18/13 15:06
Chapter: The Seasons Change

That's such a beautiful poem! I love how he compares her to all of the seasons so that she is a part of them. The ending was lovely and sad and horrible all at the same time because poor Severus will always be trapped by darkness and winter. I think that you captured everything very well--everything from the tone to the imagery was flawless.

Author's Response: Wow, I am speechless. Thank you for that high praise! :) I hope you enjoy everything else you read. :)

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